Hey Tesseract! I found you!
Just a fun guy to be around with yet...I hate the retarded noobs...not the people who first get here the ones who are just stupid using bad grammer you know...
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Mary-lou
"Just a fun guy to be around with yet...I hate the retarded noobs...not the people who first get here the ones who are just stupid using bad grammer you know..."
-Grammar is spelled with an 'a', not an 'e'
-That is an incomplete sentence; you shouldn't start it with 'just'
-"...be around with..." is redundant
-Should have a comma before 'yet'
-The word 'yet' does not make much sense there
-The '...'s are unnecessary
-You need a comma after "..first get here..."
-You need a comma after "...just stupid..."
-You need a comma after "...bad grammer[sic]...)
-'You know' in that context sounds very much like a question. If that is the case, it should have a question mark.
Your turn! ^_^